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Postby aderyn » Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:25 pm

@Zilla: Well, I used a 2H pencil for my sketch and I just randomly found a think permanent marker to color it because I didn't want to use black pastel again (used it on my other Zetsubou profile. I ended up coloring a corner of my room black because of the pastel)
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:00 pm

Ohh I'm nervous about posting anything of mine @-@;

Most of my stuff is on DA..and I found another website to post my stuff on.

I'm not that good of a critiquer, but I'll see if I can help ^^;
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Postby Morangias » Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:03 pm

Zilla Senetai wrote:Xileoh- :D I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.


@Zilla: You're art is so amazing. ;___; I'm envious. lol

Anyways, I really love the patterns and such! However, maybe it's just me, but Beta's head seems a bit... odd? Near the top I mean... I don't know how to really explain it. Dx Other than that, it's fantastic! :D

... :oops: Here's a pic of mine. :oops: ...

http://malepregnancy.deviantart.com/art/Lucifer-Rainbird-105513988

I, uh.... I didn't take long on this. Just wanted to get it out from my head. You can call him Luci. :3

((And how about we don't go looking on the rest of my gallery. >.>;; There's nothing recent in there and nothing I'd want to show off. Dx ))
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:34 pm

Uhmm...I might post something from the project that my best friend and I are doing... But for right now, this is just a random drawing I did when I had the urge.


http://shizuka-kurogane.deviantart.com/ ... -102470701


I had the urge to draw her when I saw her on the back of one of the +Anima books. xD

Her arm is a little too fat to connect to her shoulder...Um..and her legs look funny...and her one foot is a little small.

I took it from a 3-4" picture and BAM made it bigger xD;;
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Postby aderyn » Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:51 pm

Shizu, she's so cute! I love the detail. It's executed very well.
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:01 pm

aderyn wrote:Shizu, she's so cute! I love the detail. It's executed very well.



Thank you~ >///<
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Postby animexCrazedxFan » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:27 pm

OHOH! I have one :]

http://animexcrazedxfan.deviantart.com/ ... e-98796903

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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:34 pm

Hurr I commented on the actual picture itself XD;
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Postby Morangias » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:35 pm

;___; Let's ignore Moran's cry for help.
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:40 pm

xD

@Moran: Other than the thought it was a girl at first, it's really good~

I suck at side profiles ><
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Postby Morangias » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:47 pm

Shizuka Kurogane wrote:xD

@Moran: Other than the thought it was a girl at first, it's really good~

I suck at side profiles ><


lol I get that a lot... >.>;;
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 pm

I'm sorry?! xD
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Postby Morangias » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:53 pm

It's fine! lol He's supposed to be girly.
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:06 pm

Oh okay. xD
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:31 am

Xileoh: yes I drew it. I have the original in my room. It takes a long time to ink those character spreads @_@

Moran: :] thanks deary, I love working on what I do. You can probably give him more of a chest even if he's a thin character, his rib cage looks quite squished, but I love his face :] If you have difficulty with side views on bodies you should look for some male stock images on DA for means of learning the side profile, or you can have a friend model for you. Try to look at the thickness of the ribcage from front to back, draw the body then from that you can see where the clothes will be.

Shizu: Cute Her legs look pudgy *hugs legs* I'm not sure if they're supposed to be like that or not but I like it. She's so cute.

Sakura: I notices you put a thickness in the lines everywhere but along the jawline. Try thickening the jawline a bit to it matches the rest.
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:39 pm

@Zilla: XD The way they were in the picture they were kinda like that. I was taking a small picture and making it a lot bigger so I might've made them a little too wide xD;; Thank you though!
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Sun Jan 18, 2009 4:50 pm

Shizuka Kurogane wrote:@Zilla: XD The way they were in the picture they were kinda like that. I was taking a small picture and making it a lot bigger so I might've made them a little too wide xD;; Thank you though!

No problem Shiza :] I'm just happy you posted it. It's so cute.
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Postby rai-chan » Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:38 am

http://rouxcamina.deviantart.com/art/Al ... -102441371



Some fan art of one of Zilla's mangas.
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Myuu-chan~ -huggles him.-

Anyways.
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Tue Jan 20, 2009 2:09 pm

rai-chan wrote:http://rouxcamina.deviantart.com/art/Alamagi-Part-1-102441371



Some fan art of one of Zilla's mangas.
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Rai is the sweetest :D >3< I wanna see you finish this.
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Postby aderyn » Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:29 pm

Awwwww! Rai, it's really cute! And recycled paper FTW! Save the planet and draw at the same time! :D
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