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Postby animexCrazedxFan » Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:23 pm

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Postby Zilla Senetai » Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:10 pm

Her body seems very thin. You should reduce the space her arms take up slightly and enlarge her chest area. ANd i'm not talking about making her boobtastic neither. XD
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Postby animexCrazedxFan » Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:22 pm

'kay! 8D
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Postby AnimeFlux » Fri Jan 23, 2009 9:46 am

Agreeing with Zilla.

Also, did you intend to completely cover her eyebrows? It's a stylistic choice, of course, but many artists overlay the eyebrows over the hair so that you can still see the character's expression. At the moment she has a bit of a vacant stare, and I think eyebrows might give her a bit more personality. Just my opinion, though.
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Postby animexCrazedxFan » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:48 pm

Oh, okay, thanks!

I think that when I drew it, I just to give her a little bit of a....ditzy expression. Her eyes are a little shaded to kind of have a hypnotized expression. Did that work? xD
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Postby AnimeFlux » Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:40 am

Ditzy, no, but definitely hypnotized. Kinda like she's in a trance, in my opinion.
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:49 pm

I have not done fanart in a long time. http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -111065707 Crit time.
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Postby -A-I-R-Y- » Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:44 pm

Zilla, know that I am very honest when asked for my opinion on things and all I can say is... that I love your art. I'm not a fan of bright things but you didn't make it sickenly bright.

here is one of mine http://anti-fangirl93.deviantart.com/ar ... -111999914 keep in mind that I did this when I was 13 and that I'm not that good with anime style drawing I'm better with more realistic drawings.
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:07 am

-A-I-R-Y- wrote:Zilla, know that I am very honest when asked for my opinion on things and all I can say is... that I love your art. I'm not a fan of bright things but you didn't make it sickenly bright.

here is one of mine http://anti-fangirl93.deviantart.com/ar ... -111999914 keep in mind that I did this when I was 13 and that I'm not that good with anime style drawing I'm better with more realistic drawings.

I pretty much like his face but his clothes can be better. Try looking up clothes (mainly folds and fabric) tutorials. It'll improve your clothes ten-fold. :] His pose also seems to be a bit off. Try to do a body outline before drawing the clothes on. It'll help you figure out folds and pose. :] Hope that helps.
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Postby -A-I-R-Y- » Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:07 pm

Zilla Senetai wrote:I pretty much like his face but his clothes can be better. Try looking up clothes (mainly folds and fabric) tutorials. It'll improve your clothes ten-fold. :] His pose also seems to be a bit off. Try to do a body outline before drawing the clothes on. It'll help you figure out folds and pose. :] Hope that helps.

Thank you ^__^ I'll try that
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Fri Feb 27, 2009 12:32 am

http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -113044307 I just wanna get crit on this to see if there are any other loose ends I can tie up. I know the hat is levitatin' sorta so that's the only thing I don't need crit for. (cause I'm gonna fix it.)

Also can anyone suggest shapes you like? They can be geometric or symbol shapes. I am using lots of shape based outfits in my character designs. The image above should illustrate that pretty well. (arrows are everywhere on that outfit.)
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:16 pm

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Nyuu I want opinions on this. ._. This is the second time I've down a drawing like this. I kinda like it.

I had to fix his eyes again so I don't have that edited picture. So I already know his eyes look funny. xD
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Postby Zilla Senetai » Tue Mar 03, 2009 9:52 pm

The eyes look a tad off. Also you should try darkening the shadows on his face to show more dimension.
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Postby Shizuka Kurogane » Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:19 pm

Zilla Senetai wrote:The eyes look a tad off. Also you should try darkening the shadows on his face to show more dimension.


Thanks, I actually did go back and fix everything, but I haven't gotten it back yet.. >_< I want my Jackson!!
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Postby Niki Lemonade » Sun Mar 15, 2009 11:37 pm

I had to illustrate myself for illustration class, and I was wondering what you guys thought

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Postby Zilla Senetai » Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:16 am

Niki Lemonade wrote:I had to illustrate myself for illustration class, and I was wondering what you guys thought

http://nikilemonade.deviantart.com/art/ ... -114254583

The proportions look off, I like the concept though. :]

BTW I love your comic. (Though I have not gotten the chance to read it in some time.)
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Postby aderyn » Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:04 pm

I agree with Zilla's comment that the proportions are off. However, I really, really, really LOVE the background to it. It's very colorful (and I'm a sucker for anything colorful) and I love the patterns and designs you used.
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Postby xileoh » Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:23 pm

this is a little sketch I did in the middle of the night a few days ago:

http://xileohp.deviantart.com/art/touch ... -111165866

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Postby Zilla Senetai » Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:21 pm

xileoh wrote:this is a little sketch I did in the middle of the night a few days ago:

http://xileohp.deviantart.com/art/touch ... -111165866

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....I like it... o-o It looks ominous.
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Postby pancake-fong » Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:38 pm

Here are two pieces that I'd like crit on...(I'm not much of an artist and both are fairly older pictures).

http://siyasais.deviantart.com/art/Happ ... J-93913586 (I HATE drawing hands)

http://siyasais.deviantart.com/art/Sayu ... o-90363667 (this one I did back when I was like 15)

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