• http://www.animazement.org/
  • It is currently Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:18 pm

Sign In

User menu

FAQ
Register
Login
Animazement Fan Forum

Art Critique

Gifted with artistic ability or just wanting to collect some great works of art? This is the section for you!

Moderator: BobGuy

Art Critique

Postby Zilla Senetai » Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:36 pm

If you're like me you're always looking to better yourself in the arts. I feel with help from peers is a good means of improving one's self. :] Post any are you'd like some criticism on here.

RULES: (Because I care; I know I can't enforce these but it's just to keep things going smoothly here)
1- Don't be a troll D:< These people are baring their work so they can be better. Pointlessly bashing them will just make me dislike you.
2- Any skill level is allowed. It doesn't matter if you're a art guru or a novice starting out. All that matters is you tried.
3- LINK TO ALL IMAGES TO BE CRITQUED Since this will be a image heavy forum we don't want to have people waiting a half hour for the page to load.
4- Do your best to give friendly advice. :]
Image Seat 40 Image
User avatar
Zilla Senetai
Emergency Food Supply
 
Posts: 641
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 am
Location: South River, NJ

Postby kawaii-ness » Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:09 pm

Sticky'd because it's a good idea.
Find out just what any people while quietly submit to and you have the exact measure of injustice and wrong which will be imposed on them. -Frederick Douglas

In a time of universal deceit, telling the truth is a revolutionary act. -George Orwell
User avatar
kawaii-ness
Cuterest Shinigami Captain
 
Posts: 262
Joined: Mon May 14, 2007 11:28 pm
Location: Cary, NC

Postby Zilla Senetai » Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:54 pm

kawaii-ness wrote:Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?
Image Seat 40 Image
User avatar
Zilla Senetai
Emergency Food Supply
 
Posts: 641
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 am
Location: South River, NJ

Postby kawaii-ness » Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:39 am

Disclaimer: I don't know much about art. I just know when something looks right, and when it look a little off. So take my critique's with a grain of salt.

The chibi is cute, and the good thing about chibi's is that anything goes. If I were to pick anything, I guess it would be that that boobies look a little small compared to the rest of the upper body. But, aren't proportions supposed to be different since it's a chibi?
Find out just what any people while quietly submit to and you have the exact measure of injustice and wrong which will be imposed on them. -Frederick Douglas

In a time of universal deceit, telling the truth is a revolutionary act. -George Orwell
User avatar
kawaii-ness
Cuterest Shinigami Captain
 
Posts: 262
Joined: Mon May 14, 2007 11:28 pm
Location: Cary, NC

Postby Black Lace » Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:24 pm

Zilla Senetai wrote:
kawaii-ness wrote:Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?


aw that looks cute. I really don't see anyting off. But if I had to pick I would say either the boobs or the shoes, They're probably men to be like that I dont know.
I think it looks so cute. I love you're coloring skills.
User avatar
Black Lace
Newest Host in Ouran High School
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 5:41 pm
Location: Phantasma

Postby Yuki_Tenshi » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:05 pm

Zilla Senetai wrote:
kawaii-ness wrote:Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?


I think its cute, the coloring is great diff a 9/10 ^.^
Haku cosplay: 40%
Pink Yukata Haku cosplay: 100%
gothic lolita Haku cosplay: 100%
Akatsuki Haku Cosplay: 40%
Gothic Lolita Ritsuka: 50%
Image
AZ 2009:
Friday: Pink Yukata Haku
Saturday: Pink Yukata Haku
Sunday: Gothic Haku
User avatar
Yuki_Tenshi
Faceless Minion of Big Fire
 
Posts: 30
Joined: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:43 pm
Location: Shallotte, nc

Postby Yuki_Tenshi » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:10 pm

Okay, im not that great at drawing, i wont lie, but, how did i do on this?

http://mist-of-androgyny.deviantart.com ... -105839804

>_< dont be to hard on me!!
Haku cosplay: 40%
Pink Yukata Haku cosplay: 100%
gothic lolita Haku cosplay: 100%
Akatsuki Haku Cosplay: 40%
Gothic Lolita Ritsuka: 50%
Image
AZ 2009:
Friday: Pink Yukata Haku
Saturday: Pink Yukata Haku
Sunday: Gothic Haku
User avatar
Yuki_Tenshi
Faceless Minion of Big Fire
 
Posts: 30
Joined: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:43 pm
Location: Shallotte, nc

Postby Black Lace » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:13 pm

Yuki_Tenshi wrote:Okay, im not that great at drawing, i wont lie, but, how did i do on this?

http://mist-of-androgyny.deviantart.com ... -105839804

>_< dont be to hard on me!!


i always like sketchy lines (one of the reasons why I love Model, beside the Plot lol). You actually did pretty good, in my opinion. Do you think you may want ot color it soon?
User avatar
Black Lace
Newest Host in Ouran High School
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 5:41 pm
Location: Phantasma

Postby Yuki_Tenshi » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:15 pm

im not so great at coloring, i might use my GIMP system to color it alittle, or ill get my friend whos good at coloring to do it for me XD

Thanks btw, i worked kind of hard on it >_<
Haku cosplay: 40%
Pink Yukata Haku cosplay: 100%
gothic lolita Haku cosplay: 100%
Akatsuki Haku Cosplay: 40%
Gothic Lolita Ritsuka: 50%
Image
AZ 2009:
Friday: Pink Yukata Haku
Saturday: Pink Yukata Haku
Sunday: Gothic Haku
User avatar
Yuki_Tenshi
Faceless Minion of Big Fire
 
Posts: 30
Joined: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:43 pm
Location: Shallotte, nc

Postby Black Lace » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:17 pm

Yuki_Tenshi wrote:im not so great at coloring, i might use my GIMP system to color it alittle, or ill get my friend whos good at coloring to do it for me XD

Thanks btw, i worked kind of hard on it >_<


it looks good, the work paid off.
User avatar
Black Lace
Newest Host in Ouran High School
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 5:41 pm
Location: Phantasma

Postby Black Lace » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:21 pm

um, okay. Yeah. http://www.mangafreak14.proboards81.com ... thread=187
I drew this a couple years ago, and that was the time I hated drawing feet/shoes an dloved the never ending legs look.
Be kind, pwease.
User avatar
Black Lace
Newest Host in Ouran High School
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 5:41 pm
Location: Phantasma

Postby xileoh » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:56 pm

I'm not much of a critic, but I think you have the basic body shape down. The legs are a little long, but other then that, I think it's pretty good ^-^
"I believe this is yer sanwhich..."

Image TS 19th Seat ~not a man!~
http://xileohp.deviantart.com/


I'M MAKING DOLLIES NAO!!! *PANICDANCEGO*

CHECK OUT MAH WEBSITE!!
http://WWW.LATENTARCADIA.COM
*shameless self promotion*
User avatar
xileoh
Amazing Win
 
Posts: 340
Joined: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:50 am
Location: upside-down

Postby Zilla Senetai » Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:16 pm

Agreed. The legs are a tad long :] but I still like her.
Image Seat 40 Image
User avatar
Zilla Senetai
Emergency Food Supply
 
Posts: 641
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 am
Location: South River, NJ

Postby xileoh » Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:56 pm

"I believe this is yer sanwhich..."

Image TS 19th Seat ~not a man!~
http://xileohp.deviantart.com/


I'M MAKING DOLLIES NAO!!! *PANICDANCEGO*

CHECK OUT MAH WEBSITE!!
http://WWW.LATENTARCADIA.COM
*shameless self promotion*
User avatar
xileoh
Amazing Win
 
Posts: 340
Joined: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:50 am
Location: upside-down

Postby aderyn » Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:29 pm

I really love the shading on this, xileoh! I'm not sure if you were drawing a building or something in front of the character though. If you were, I'm very interested in what it'll look like.

I might as well add mine up here too. I'm just starting out, so please don't be too harsh *bows*

http://aderynthemoose.deviantart.com/ar ... 2-92569131
Squad 14: Fukutaicho *I'm a GIRL!!!!*
Freelancer Washington aka Recovery One
Image
User avatar
aderyn
<OM NOM NOM>
 
Posts: 437
Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 3:54 pm
Location: Covered in snow 9 months of the year

Postby Zilla Senetai » Fri Jan 16, 2009 5:43 pm

Xileoh- :D I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.
Image Seat 40 Image
User avatar
Zilla Senetai
Emergency Food Supply
 
Posts: 641
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 am
Location: South River, NJ

Postby Black Lace » Fri Jan 16, 2009 8:53 pm

Wow, the tone looks awesome! I bet your pen is feeling it now.
User avatar
Black Lace
Newest Host in Ouran High School
 
Posts: 220
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 5:41 pm
Location: Phantasma

Postby aderyn » Sat Jan 17, 2009 12:39 am

Zilla Senetai wrote:Xileoh- :D I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.


By Addy, I hope you're meaning me and not the other Addy :D

Anyways, yes, It's based off the screenshot. I'm starting off simple and want to make my interpretation of screenshots. Then I hope to move on to more original work.
Squad 14: Fukutaicho *I'm a GIRL!!!!*
Freelancer Washington aka Recovery One
Image
User avatar
aderyn
<OM NOM NOM>
 
Posts: 437
Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 3:54 pm
Location: Covered in snow 9 months of the year

Postby Zilla Senetai » Sat Jan 17, 2009 12:56 am

aderyn wrote:
Zilla Senetai wrote:Xileoh- :D I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.


By Addy, I hope you're meaning me and not the other Addy :D

Anyways, yes, It's based off the screenshot. I'm starting off simple and want to make my interpretation of screenshots. Then I hope to move on to more original work.

Yes sorry I'm terrible with nicknames *is shot*
Might I ask what you used? i like the clarity of the image. I should be getting the manga in the mail next month.

Lace: thanks for the compliment. My pen actually is quite well. :] And my wrist doesn't feel writer/artist's cramp anymore so I'm well too. It just took a long time.
Image Seat 40 Image
User avatar
Zilla Senetai
Emergency Food Supply
 
Posts: 641
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 am
Location: South River, NJ

Postby xileoh » Sat Jan 17, 2009 12:58 am

Zilla Senetai: You drew that?! I saw that, but I didn't know you drew it! It's awesome!
"I believe this is yer sanwhich..."

Image TS 19th Seat ~not a man!~
http://xileohp.deviantart.com/


I'M MAKING DOLLIES NAO!!! *PANICDANCEGO*

CHECK OUT MAH WEBSITE!!
http://WWW.LATENTARCADIA.COM
*shameless self promotion*
User avatar
xileoh
Amazing Win
 
Posts: 340
Joined: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:50 am
Location: upside-down

Next

Return to Artist Alley

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests

cron
 

Who is online

In total there are 3 users online :: 0 registered, 1 hidden and 2 guests (based on users active over the past 5 minutes)
Most users ever online was 122 on Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:19 am

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests