Art Critique

[Zilla Senetai]

If you're like me you're always looking to better yourself in the arts. I feel with help from peers is a good means of improving one's self. :] Post any are you'd like some criticism on here.

RULES: (Because I care; I know I can't enforce these but it's just to keep things going smoothly here)
1- Don't be a troll D:< These people are baring their work so they can be better. Pointlessly bashing them will just make me dislike you.
2- Any skill level is allowed. It doesn't matter if you're a art guru or a novice starting out. All that matters is you tried.
3- LINK TO ALL IMAGES TO BE CRITQUED Since this will be a image heavy forum we don't want to have people waiting a half hour for the page to load.
4- Do your best to give friendly advice. :]

[kawaii-ness]

Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

[Zilla Senetai]

Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?

[kawaii-ness]

Disclaimer: I don't know much about art. I just know when something looks right, and when it look a little off. So take my critique's with a grain of salt.

The chibi is cute, and the good thing about chibi's is that anything goes. If I were to pick anything, I guess it would be that that boobies look a little small compared to the rest of the upper body. But, aren't proportions supposed to be different since it's a chibi?

[Black Lace]

Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?

aw that looks cute. I really don't see anyting off. But if I had to pick I would say either the boobs or the shoes, They're probably men to be like that I dont know.
I think it looks so cute. I love you're coloring skills.

[Yuki_Tenshi]

Sticky'd because it's a good idea.

thanks :] that should get more people to come here for some art advice.


Since nobody has posted anything I'll go ahead.

People seem to think this is cute but I think something's off.
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -108024206
Can anyone help?

I think its cute, the coloring is great diff a 9/10 ^.^

[Yuki_Tenshi]

Okay, im not that great at drawing, i wont lie, but, how did i do on this?

http://mist-of-androgyny.deviantart.com ... -105839804

>_< dont be to hard on me!!

[Black Lace]

Okay, im not that great at drawing, i wont lie, but, how did i do on this?

http://mist-of-androgyny.deviantart.com ... -105839804

>_< dont be to hard on me!!

i always like sketchy lines (one of the reasons why I love Model, beside the Plot lol). You actually did pretty good, in my opinion. Do you think you may want ot color it soon?

[Yuki_Tenshi]

im not so great at coloring, i might use my GIMP system to color it alittle, or ill get my friend whos good at coloring to do it for me XD

Thanks btw, i worked kind of hard on it >_<

[Black Lace]

im not so great at coloring, i might use my GIMP system to color it alittle, or ill get my friend whos good at coloring to do it for me XD

Thanks btw, i worked kind of hard on it >_<

it looks good, the work paid off.

[Black Lace]

um, okay. Yeah. http://www.mangafreak14.proboards81.com ... thread=187
I drew this a couple years ago, and that was the time I hated drawing feet/shoes an dloved the never ending legs look.
Be kind, pwease.

[xileoh]

I'm not much of a critic, but I think you have the basic body shape down. The legs are a little long, but other then that, I think it's pretty good ^-^

[Zilla Senetai]

Agreed. The legs are a tad long :] but I still like her.

[xileoh]

okay, so...

http://fc25.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/ ... ileohp.jpg

-flinches-

[aderyn]

I really love the shading on this, xileoh! I'm not sure if you were drawing a building or something in front of the character though. If you were, I'm very interested in what it'll look like.

I might as well add mine up here too. I'm just starting out, so please don't be too harsh *bows*

http://aderynthemoose.deviantart.com/ar ... 2-92569131

[Zilla Senetai]

Xileoh- I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.

[Black Lace]

Wow, the tone looks awesome! I bet your pen is feeling it now.

[aderyn]

Xileoh- I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.

By Addy, I hope you're meaning me and not the other Addy

Anyways, yes, It's based off the screenshot. I'm starting off simple and want to make my interpretation of screenshots. Then I hope to move on to more original work.

[Zilla Senetai]

Xileoh- I adore the poseThe arms look a tad skinny but that might be your style.

Addy- are you basing this off of a screenshot?



And here something more from me. This took me some hours to ink... DX
http://zillasenetai.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109379002
Any suggestions for my next go round? All patterns were done by hand because I don't own any screentone.

By Addy, I hope you're meaning me and not the other Addy

Anyways, yes, It's based off the screenshot. I'm starting off simple and want to make my interpretation of screenshots. Then I hope to move on to more original work.

Yes sorry I'm terrible with nicknames *is shot*
Might I ask what you used? i like the clarity of the image. I should be getting the manga in the mail next month.

Lace: thanks for the compliment. My pen actually is quite well. :] And my wrist doesn't feel writer/artist's cramp anymore so I'm well too. It just took a long time.

[xileoh]

Zilla Senetai: You drew that?! I saw that, but I didn't know you drew it! It's awesome!